英语

写作

2013年考研英语（一）真题小作文

Directions:
Write an email of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, inviting him/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write nearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the email. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

题目分析

这是一封邀请信。写信人李明需要邀请学院的一位外教担任即将举办的英语演讲比赛的评委。信中要包含必要的细节信息，如比赛的时间、地点等。

写作思路

第一段：

本文是一封写给外教的信，需要自我介绍，因此采用公务信函（问候致意+自我介绍+表明目的）的框架。

第二段：

需要基于题目，灵活修改以下锦囊妙句，选择其中三至四句，通过合理的串联，快速构建一篇内容翔实、理由充分的文章。以下是备选锦囊妙句：

锦囊妙句1：

1. 趣味运动会计划于2025年12月26日下午2:00在我们大学的学生活动中心/腾讯会议软件/江苏省江阴市华西村举行，将持续3小时/天。（此外，本次活动将通过抖音进行直播。）

The fun sports day is scheduled to be held on December 26, 2025, at 2 PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university / via the Tencent Meeting app / in Huaxi Village, Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province, and it will last for 3 hours/days.(In addition, the event will be live-streamed on TikTok.)

这个英语演讲比赛计划于2013年12月26日下午2:00在我们大学的学生活动中心举行，将持续3小时。

The English speech contest is scheduled to be held on December 26,2013,at 2PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university,and it will last for 3 hours.

锦囊妙句2：

2. 活动旨在激发年轻一代做某事的热情/给某人提供机会做某事/帮助某人适应大学生活/帮助某人加深对某物的认识。

This activity is designed to inspire the younger generation to do sth./provide sb. with an opportunity to do sth./help sb. adapt to college life./help sb. foster a deeper understanding of sth.

活动旨在激发年轻一代学习英语，丰富课余文化生活以及交朋友的热情。

This activity is designed to inspire the younger generation to learn English, enrich their extracurricular and cultural life, and make friends.

锦囊妙句3：

3. 活动将由一系列环节组成，比如才艺展示和与专家互动交流。我们学校的校长将为所有参与者致欢迎辞/为优胜者颁奖。

This event will consist of a series of activities, such as talent shows and interactive exchanges with experts. Our university president will deliver a welcome address to all participants/will present awards to the winners.

活动将由一系列环节组成，比如定题演讲和问答环节。我们学校的校长将为优胜者颁奖。

The event will consist of a series of activities, such as prepared speeches and Q&A sessions. Our university president will present awards to the winners.

锦囊妙句5：

5. 如果你有时间来参加，这次活动对你来说将会是一次有意义且难忘的经历。

If you have the time to participate, this event will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience for you.

如果你有时间来参加，这次活动对你来说将会是一次有意义且难忘的经历。

If you have the time to participate, this event will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience for you.

锦囊妙句6：

6. 以您非凡的专业知识，我们希望您能发表演讲，给学生提出有启发性的建议。

With your exceptional expertise, we hope you can deliver a speech offering inspirational advice to the students.

以您非凡的专业知识，我们希望您能担任评委，并且给学生提出有启发性的建议。

With your exceptional expertise, we hope you can serve as a judge and offer inspirational advice to the students.

锦囊妙句9：

9. 故宫在中国人民中很受欢迎/评价很高，它一定能给你带来全新的体验。

The Palace Museum enjoys widespread popularity/a high reputation among Chinese people. It will definitely bring you a brand-new experience.

这个比赛在大学生中很受欢迎，它一定能给你带来全新的体验。

The contest enjoys widespread popularity among university students. It will definitely bring you a brand-new experience.

锦囊妙句14：

14. 随信附上议程/细节，供您参考。

The schedule/details is/are attached for reference.

随信附上议程，供您参考。

The schedule is attached for your reference.

第三段

期待对方答复

妙句成文

Dear Prof. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I, on behalf of the Student Union, am writing this email to invite you to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.

First and foremost, The English speech contest is scheduled to be held on December 26,2013,at 2PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university,and it will last for 3 hours.【妙句1】 What is more, The contest enjoys widespread popularity among university students. It will definitely bring you a brand-new experience.【妙句9】Last but not least, with your exceptional expertise, we hope you can serve as a judge and offer inspirational advice to the students.【妙句6】 The schedule is attached for your reference. 【妙句14】

Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

每日一句

Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign, which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.(2011, Reading Comprehension, Part A Text 3)

词汇

alleviate: v. 减轻，缓和
recall crisis: 召回危机
relatively: adv. 相对地；相关地
well-orchestrated: 精心策划的
social-media: 社交媒体
engage with sb.: 与某人互动或接洽

第一步：找谓语

Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign, which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.

第二步：断句

原句中有2处谓语，包含两件事，其谓语动词位于以下分句中：

• 动词：alleviated 位于主句中
• 动词：included 位于which引导的定语从句中

按照标点、引导词以及谓语，可以将原句分为以下分句：

• Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign, —— 主句
• which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg. —— 非限定性定语从句

第三步：简化

主句

Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign,

• 主语部分：Toyota Motor
• 插入语部分：for example
• 谓语部分：alleviated
• 宾语部分：some of the damage
  • 介词短语：of the damage 做some的后置定语，补充说明some的范围
  • 定冠词：the 修饰名词 damage
  • 名词：damage 为介词 of 的宾语
• 后置定语：from its recall crisis 修饰名词 damage ，解释说明 damage的来源
• 时间状语：earlier this year 修饰主句，说明主句发生的时间
• 方式状语：with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign,
  • with 引导的介词短语做方式状语，修饰动词：alleviated，说明动作发生的方式
  • 不定冠词 a 修饰名词 campaign
  • 并列结构：relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response 做前置定语修饰名词：campaign
    • 副词：relatively 修饰形容词 quick
    • 复合形容词：well-orchestrated 修饰名词词组：social-media response campaign
    • 复合名词：social-media 做前置定语修饰名词：response campaign

去掉主句扩展部分，就得到了句子的核心：

• Toyota Motor …… alleviated some …… —— 丰田汽车公司 …… 减少了一些……

非限定性定语从句

which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.

• 主语部分：which
• 谓语部分：included
• 宾语部分：efforts
• 后置定语：to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.修饰宾语：efforts
  • 介词短语：with consumers 为动词engage的宾语
    • 名词：consumers为介词：with的宾语
  • 副词：directly 修饰动词：engage
  • 介词短语：on sites 做地点状语，修饰动词：engage
  • 介词短语：such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg 做后置定语，举例说明sites
    • 并列结构：Twitter and the social-news site Digg 为介词 as的宾语
      • 定冠词：the 修饰名词：Digg
      • 复合名词词组：social-news site 作为同位语，修饰名词：Digg

去掉主句扩展部分，就得到了句子的核心：

• which included efforts …… —— 运动包括努力……